School Bag

Silently junked in a dusty corner,
You ended things up in unexpected border
Used me for year and said was so loved,
Carried your things and it was well packed

I was with you walking in school,
You said that I’m so nice coz’ I was so cool
We spent many good times together!
A year of happiness is so like forever

What happen to us my beloved oh pal?
You dumped me so bad and was so emotional
You found someone better than me
Surely forget our sweet memory

Crying so loud with plenty of dusts,
I’ll die so soon until world turn to rust
I guess this is how my life should be!
A school bag won’t last till eternity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Chakrabarty Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 12:29 PM
A good fun write. Congrats on win Lei>Love>rajat
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Lei:-) Hugs Jan xx
Meade Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 10:12 PM
Nice!! I get attached to my backpacks -- they are like old friends. I pulled an old one out the other day and loaned it to my wife -- I could swear that is smiled at me! Keep writing dear friend. 7
Smith Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 8:58 PM
I love personifications and yours doesnt disappoint...Tim
Strauss Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Thanks so much Tim! Glad that you liked it! Have a nice day!
Allison Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Love the personification here - served its useful purpose and now you have moved on bit like a relationship now finally run its course - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
Strauss Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Thanks Jan for reading my poem! I appreciate you for giving me 7
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