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School Bag

Silently junked in a dusty corner, You ended things up in unexpected border Used me for year and said was so loved, Carried your things and it was well packed I was with you walking in school, You said that I’m so nice coz’ I was so cool We spent many good times together! A year of happiness is so like forever What happen to us my beloved oh pal? You dumped me so bad and was so emotional You found someone better than me Surely forget our sweet memory Crying so loud with plenty of dusts, I’ll die so soon until world turn to rust I guess this is how my life should be! A school bag won’t last till eternity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/30/2015 12:29:00 PM
A good fun write. Congrats on win Lei>Love>rajat
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:15:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Lei:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/10/2015 10:12:00 PM
Nice!! I get attached to my backpacks -- they are like old friends. I pulled an old one out the other day and loaned it to my wife -- I could swear that is smiled at me! Keep writing dear friend. 7
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Date: 1/10/2015 8:58:00 PM
I love personifications and yours doesnt disappoint...Tim
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Lei Strauss
Date: 1/10/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim! Glad that you liked it! Have a nice day!
Date: 1/10/2015 7:25:00 PM
Love the personification here - served its useful purpose and now you have moved on bit like a relationship now finally run its course - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Lei Strauss
Date: 1/10/2015 7:47:00 PM
Thanks Jan for reading my poem! I appreciate you for giving me 7

Book: Shattered Sighs