School

I am in this school which is 
really cool however its so 
amazing to 
play n study teachers are like 
gods who  teaches you ohh 
build up our future no need 
of any tutor luvs you a lot 
wanna c you at the top school 
provides ol the facilities 
remove ol ur
disabilities
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October 8, 2013 at 7:17 PM
Aditi, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 8, 2013 at 9:20 PM
Thanks friend..!! :) :) Want to know about you more... *hugs* ^_^
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October 7, 2013 at 6:16 PM
Aditi, intresting and deep, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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October 7, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Thanks a lot dear..!!
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October 7, 2013 at 5:46 PM
this is really cute. But I hope they are teaching you spelling. Using ur for your is maybe the way our future kids are going but I hope they don't forget the right word!!
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October 7, 2013 at 11:13 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Aditi ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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