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"Where is the sun, where is the moon?"
the mirror asks.
He sees the silence in the other's gaze—
crouched against the wall
an empty face where once
two small diamonds burned
and cut in two
who once was whole

"Where is the blanket for the cold?"
the mirror asks.
He swipes a star 
from far to balance on his outstretched hand
it tears a trail of blood
through fabric frail
and skin so thin below his ear
he stitches squares of dark
with sparks of warmth
to cloak against the night

"When will you make me whole?"
the mirror asks.
He strikes a match to light the star
and from his hand small grains bright sand
glimmer in the fickle white
he spills them on the floor
before his empty him

"I can't be us" 
he says with faint apology
and buckled knees—
while in the other's eyes
life fades
without a fight

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August 12, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White
1st place in contest: The Poet's Shadow
Sponsor: Greg Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nix Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Wow, this poem was excellent. I’m so glad I’ve been able to read this one!
White Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Thanks Cody, happy you like it :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 9:44 PM
A truly stunning pen my friend. A fine win love, congratulations xomo
White Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 2:27 AM
Thanks so much ma mo :)
Pal Chowdhury Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Congrats friend for the first place. Well written pal
White Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Thank you so much my friend :)
Roberts Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 12:28 PM
That empty face rolls away with an "Astounding FIRST PLACE" Congratulations , friend
White Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Thanks Donna :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Congrats in your most deserved win, Darren!
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Thanks so much Kim :)
Wood Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 6:51 PM
I'm with Tim. Somehow I missed this. Wow! A well-deserved win. Congratulations Darren.
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:35 PM
Thanks Dean, glad you like this :)
Smith Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 11:12 AM
How'd I miss this gem? Wow Darren and a big congratulations
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:46 PM
Thanks so much my friend :)
Ella Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations Darren :D
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:45 PM
Thanks so much my friend <3
Cresswell Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:34 AM
Congratulations This is a winner
White Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 1:44 PM
Patricia thank you :)
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August 19, 2017 at 10:47 PM
Amazing creativity! Congrats on the 1st place win! :) Sunita
White Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:45 PM
Thank you Sunita :)
Barden Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 9:05 PM
What can I say, my friend? This is exquisite, and it affected me deeply ... love everything about it, and it is a well-deserved win! Congrats on FIRST PLACE, Darren!! :-)
White Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:45 PM
Wow my friend, this is my first trophy ever! I am truly honored, thank you sooooo much!
Ella Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 5:15 PM
I love this poem Darren. Good luck on the contest! :)
White Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 10:50 PM
Thanks so much my friend :) <3
Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 7:06 AM
Oh! A strangely sad poem that tugs at my heartstrings, Darren:)
White Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 10:50 PM
It's different, isn't it Jo? :)
Vaso Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Darren, this is amazing, and as you can imagine I can sure relate to this!!!! :)
White Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 2:05 AM
Yes, I know you can :) Thanks my friend!
Cozart Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 9:40 AM
Sad and beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
White Avatar
August 13, 2017 at 2:04 AM
Dale, thank you so much
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