Nette Onclaud Poet Monoku

Scented Mountains' Bosoms

SCENTED MOUNTAINS’ BOSOMS- MONOKU
                  
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* splash of orange dawn…tilting granite bosoms glazed with scented thyme *
                                       
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Rick Parise’s “ Nature Monoku” 
By nette onclaud

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Kash Poet June 2, 2011 at 9:05 AM Just Excellent Nette...best wishes..

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 2, 2011 at 3:29 AM this is a great way to depict the photo nette! love that splash! feast for the senses indeed hugs :)

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2011 at 4:55 PM Brought some very enjoyable scents to mind..Enjoyed reading this eve..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and letting me know that my work placed in the contest..Sara

James Foulk June 1, 2011 at 12:13 PM very creative and so refreshing of a read.

James Fraser June 1, 2011 at 10:22 AM Koolio take on the image in the contest Nette. Nicely captured by your eyes to thought. Good luck in the contest Princess.....:)

Gwendolen Song June 1, 2011 at 9:34 AM Hit almost all my senses in this monoku..relaxing like a gorgeous dawn! Enjoyed. ps...done with the first chapter...wink wink... Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich June 1, 2011 at 9:29 AM very interesting adding scent into the mix, Nette. I like this very much!

Nick Bagnall June 1, 2011 at 9:25 AM welll done for capturing more of the image in you poem. How did you manage to get 124 view of it in the first hour - WOW !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 1, 2011 at 8:44 AM phenomenal Monoku Nette my friend and a brilliant depiction of that gorgeous photo ..good luck .. and just redid a few lines in my entry for Constance... the spell check works not too well and misses many words ... oh..splashes to u luv..