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Scented Leaves

Scented Leaves A garden lost, in the footsteps of time, Beckons from a garden of scented leaves Remembering perfection in the cool of the evening, Memories awaking long dormant memories Now redeemed by scars; A path that ends in gates reopened To walk beneath an arch of aromatic wonder Re-birthing wisps of fragrant balm Lost in time, long past the birth of light, To walk in solitude past temptation of fallen brittle leaves Unscented; With each day now an echoing paean raised In one voice without discord Of roars or snarling fears grabbing space Or saving daylight demanding domination; Clarity in naked transparency – No need to cover original beauty – Night at one with the daystar While sun and moon and stars hold hands To step in neat circles within the celestial perfume of praise Like a garland of scented leaves woven in this sacred space; Where summer, fall, winter, spring Revolve in mystery with not one Day or drop of rain out of place – No intrusion of wilting heat or blustering cold, Work or wrenching pain, Intrude upon the oneness by wilting petals That flower above the arbor of scented foliage; No separation from the original plan, The hand that drew up from the chaos This design in the rich bouquet of creation Turns back to be entwined again In the fragrance of a perfect smile floating like flora before eyes reopened - A signature written in a perfumed garden - One heartbeat beating in perfect synchronicity With hearts reunited in the evening breeze Not lost like a snowflake on a summer highway – A teardrop in sea of sand – Eternal covenant, Love and passion waking in one body - Intimacy among the scented leaves. Date – November 14, 2019 Contest – Scented Leaves Sponsor – Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 1/9/2020 7:29:00 PM
glad to see this one shining at the top and happy to read it again... congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/10/2020 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. This poem was a blessing to write - thinking about how we are continually called back to the original garden.
Date: 1/9/2020 4:39:00 PM
Well done, Sam and congrats on your high placement. Love all the celestial and garden imagery ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/10/2020 1:29:00 PM
Thank you John. I guess it shows I love gardens and stargazing all combined into the imagery of this poem..
Date: 1/9/2020 4:36:00 PM
You certainly have a way with words, Sam-- love the continuous unfolding of imagery-- congrats!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/10/2020 12:57:00 AM
Hi L.J. Thank you so much for your message and your encouraging feedback!
Date: 1/9/2020 2:45:00 PM
This amazing piece certainly deserves its top placement Sam. Divine imagery displayed in the uniqueness of your words make this poem so special. Congratulations! xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/10/2020 12:53:00 AM
Thank you Connie. I am honored by your words. Happy New Year. Aloha!
Date: 1/9/2020 12:54:00 PM
Beautiful my dear friend!;) congratulations on a top win!;)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/9/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Brenda. And congratulations to you on your top placement!
Date: 1/9/2020 12:48:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/9/2020 5:35:00 PM
Hi Eve, Thank you for your congratulatory message - most appreciated. Hugs to you.
Date: 11/14/2019 7:24:00 PM
so many beautiful images in this piece bring it together nicely...love a tear drop on the sand, a snowflake on a summer highway...so unique... wonderful write! best wishes in the contest! :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/20/2019 3:36:00 PM
Hi Sandra, As always thank you for your feedback and your encouragement! Woke up one morning with this poem - I guess it wanted to be written! I, too, love the images in it.
Date: 11/14/2019 6:22:00 PM
Hi Sam wonderful poem you have here. Thanks for going into depth and showing your versatility. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/20/2019 3:39:00 PM
Hi Gregory, So glad you liked this poem. Thank you for your good wishes and feedback. This is a special poem for me for many reasons - was so happy to be able to share it with so many on Poetry Soup.
Date: 11/14/2019 4:15:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem. One of the best poems I've read in a long time. Full of vibrant, wonderful images. You can smell, taste and see nature, creation and the beauty of it all. Best wishes for the contest.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/20/2019 3:48:00 PM
Thank you! I am humbled.

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