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Scented Leaves

wind whistles its cutting breath rudely intrudes through roof eaves trees trembling at its gruff voice scent of fallen leaves lost in fear 11/12/2019

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Alexis Y.

Date: 11/16/2019 9:22:00 PM

Hi Eve, You described it very well. One does fear the inevitable when it's windy outside. Good content and imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great evening:-) Alexis

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/13/2019 11:25:00 PM

Great imagery write and penned well. Thanks for sharing it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2019 3:45:00 PM

nice use of personification, Eve.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/13/2019 1:07:00 AM

Wind is rude sometimes specially in India in Summer. I can relate fallen leaves to shaky mud houses. Great imagery Eve.Love.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/12/2019 5:23:00 PM

It is a pity that scented leaves fall prey to the scent of fear, Eve! Wind can be such a violent master! Hugs // paul

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/12/2019 3:41:00 PM

Absolutely love this, Eve. Making a FAV. Panagiota xxxx

Na Na

Date: 11/12/2019 3:15:00 PM

Nice Job Eve. The wind is not a nice entity in the winter time. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest

Chris Green

Date: 11/12/2019 2:57:00 PM

That's the way it has been around here the past two days, cold and gusty and making us fearful that a tree make come through the roof. Nicely expressed Eve, you captured the feeling perfectly.