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Scent of a Kiss

First kiss inhales your scent through nuzzled hair, A whispered word of love awaits just there, While soft lips embrace your succulent ear, Like a gentle breeze upon the darkened air, The warming arms that draw you ever near, Inside the heart is shaking, not with fear But with a passion that will not be bound, For love has made our souls unite, my dear, As we stumble slowly on to the ground, And watch the stars of night move without sound, Beneath the silent moon I call your name To newer senses once lost but now found, For love has come from nothing and nowhere, To show my soul the time has come to care. Form: Rubaiyat Sonnet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/20/2012 11:32:00 PM
Jemmy, Wonderful, always a pleasure to read your poetry. Have yourself a goodnight, PD ;-)
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 4/25/2012 7:31:00 AM
Thank you PD
Date: 4/20/2012 6:35:00 PM
Very interesting so the end rhyme pattern is what? [a a a a/ a a b a/ b b c b/ d d] please let me know I'm getting addicted to sonnets LOL Light & Love
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 4/25/2012 7:34:00 AM
Hi Debbie and fellow sonnet addict, the rubaiyat sonnet parameters as follows: Meter: Non specified Structure: 3 quatrains and a closing couplet Rhyme scheme: aaba bbcb ccdc aa
Date: 4/20/2012 5:39:00 AM
Sweet kiss and soft lips, shaking heart....romantic and lovely written Jemmy.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Jemmy Farmer
Date: 4/20/2012 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise x

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