Scenic Beauty

roar heard all around
waters flow down cold mountain trail
music fills air
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 5:24 AM
Sweet descriptiveness. In your title, the word "senic" is correctly spelled "scenic". Everything else looks good.
Alvez Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 8:21 AM
Thank you Robert! I appreciate your comment and critique. Cynthia
Hu Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 10:01 PM
BEAUTIFUL:)
Alvez Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Thanking you again Mad Hu for your comment. Cynthia
Poet Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 8:25 PM
Lovely haiku!Enjoyed.
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