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Scene of the Vine

The house down the street is under wraps
With hazard suits milling in its flaps

The one with the garden most luscious
Now being trampled beneath all the ruckus

The lady with the green thumb it's suggested
Has been by her Venus Fly Trap ingested




17.10.17

Composed for Kevin Shaw's
"Daft and Surreal"

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2017

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Ram R. V. Date: 11/2/2017 10:12:00 PM amusing and horrible. Well done, mo! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 11/3/2017 5:47:00 AM Ha hah! Thank you my friend! :)

Pat Adams Date: 10/23/2017 6:56:00 PM Ha! Wow, I didn't see that one coming. I love it! A fav.............xx..80) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/23/2017 8:07:00 PM Neither did she! ;) Thanks so much Pat xomo!

John Lawless Date: 10/18/2017 7:52:00 PM ...."FEED ME SEYMOUR!!" nicely bizarre take on the theme Maureen. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/18/2017 9:50:00 PM Giggle! Thank you :) xomo

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 10/18/2017 7:14:00 PM Awesome and clever rhyme Mo! Good luck in the contest!~Che :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/18/2017 9:49:00 PM Thank you! It was fun :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2017 4:49:00 PM Oh, this is so cool. I have no clue how to do a daft surreal poem but I better get my thinking cap on PRONTO! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/18/2017 9:47:00 PM Thank you! I'm still looking for your "Boo" poem :) can't wait to see what's daft and surreal up your sleeve!

Silent One Date: 10/18/2017 5:17:00 AM Oh dear, horrific ending... lol Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/18/2017 7:44:00 AM Giggle, she loved her plants, now she is one with ;p xomo!

Russell Sivey Date: 10/18/2017 4:37:00 AM That must be a very large Venus Fly Trap! Rocky Horror Picture Show reference maybe? What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed how you wrote this poem, so fluid and with every detail so perfectly positioned! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/18/2017 7:43:00 AM Yes "Feed me Seymour!" inspired ;) a little E.T. too. Thank you so much Russell you do fertilize this poet's blush! xomo

Arthur Vaso Date: 10/17/2017 9:41:00 PM So funny, loved this! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/17/2017 9:56:00 PM Yay :) that makes me happy, thank you Arthur xomo!

Janice Canerdy Date: 10/17/2017 9:07:00 PM Yikes! Good job, Maureen! Janice Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/17/2017 9:38:00 PM Tee hee! Thanks Janice :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/17/2017 8:47:00 PM Unique theme! Best for a win! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/17/2017 9:08:00 PM Thanks Vijay, another fun contest prompt :) cheers! xomo

Suzanne C. Goudreau Date: 10/17/2017 7:20:00 PM Wow beautiful imagery! A most powerful read! Enjoyed very much. You are gifted. Ty! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/17/2017 9:10:00 PM You're too kind! Thank you for this lovely visit dear poet :) xomo

Gary Smith Date: 10/17/2017 6:08:00 PM That's a hoot Maureen, good luck :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/17/2017 6:12:00 PM :) thank you Gary!

Jan Allison Date: 10/17/2017 6:00:00 PM ha ha ha I love that final couplet Mo:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/17/2017 6:03:00 PM Giggles thank you Jan :) xomo!