Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Rhyme

Scene of the Vine

The house down the street is under wraps
With hazard suits milling in its flaps

The one with the garden most luscious
Now being trampled beneath all the ruckus

The lady with the green thumb it's suggested
Has been by her Venus Fly Trap ingested




17.10.17

Composed for Kevin Shaw's
"Daft and Surreal"

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Ram R. V. November 2, 2017 at 10:12 PM amusing and horrible. Well done, mo! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 3, 2017 at 5:47 AM Ha hah! Thank you my friend! :)

Pat Adams October 23, 2017 at 6:56 PM Ha! Wow, I didn't see that one coming. I love it! A fav.............xx..80) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 23, 2017 at 8:07 PM Neither did she! ;) Thanks so much Pat xomo!

John Lawless October 18, 2017 at 7:52 PM ...."FEED ME SEYMOUR!!" nicely bizarre take on the theme Maureen. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 18, 2017 at 9:50 PM Giggle! Thank you :) xomo

Cheryl Hoffman October 18, 2017 at 7:14 PM Awesome and clever rhyme Mo! Good luck in the contest!~Che :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 18, 2017 at 9:49 PM Thank you! It was fun :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2017 at 4:49 PM Oh, this is so cool. I have no clue how to do a daft surreal poem but I better get my thinking cap on PRONTO! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 18, 2017 at 9:47 PM Thank you! I'm still looking for your "Boo" poem :) can't wait to see what's daft and surreal up your sleeve!

Silent One October 18, 2017 at 5:17 AM Oh dear, horrific ending... lol Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 18, 2017 at 7:44 AM Giggle, she loved her plants, now she is one with ;p xomo!

Russell Sivey October 18, 2017 at 4:37 AM That must be a very large Venus Fly Trap! Rocky Horror Picture Show reference maybe? What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed how you wrote this poem, so fluid and with every detail so perfectly positioned! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 18, 2017 at 7:43 AM Yes "Feed me Seymour!" inspired ;) a little E.T. too. Thank you so much Russell you do fertilize this poet's blush! xomo

Arthur Vaso October 17, 2017 at 9:41 PM So funny, loved this! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 9:56 PM Yay :) that makes me happy, thank you Arthur xomo!

Janice Canerdy October 17, 2017 at 9:07 PM Yikes! Good job, Maureen! Janice Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 9:38 PM Tee hee! Thanks Janice :) xomo!

Vijay Pandit October 17, 2017 at 8:47 PM Unique theme! Best for a win! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 9:08 PM Thanks Vijay, another fun contest prompt :) cheers! xomo

Suzanne C. Goudreau October 17, 2017 at 7:20 PM Wow beautiful imagery! A most powerful read! Enjoyed very much. You are gifted. Ty! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 9:10 PM You're too kind! Thank you for this lovely visit dear poet :) xomo

Gary Smith October 17, 2017 at 6:08 PM That's a hoot Maureen, good luck :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 6:12 PM :) thank you Gary!

Jan Allison October 17, 2017 at 6:00 PM ha ha ha I love that final couplet Mo:-) hugs jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 17, 2017 at 6:03 PM Giggles thank you Jan :) xomo!