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dreams then hope leave search through jumbled draws crowded closets and you won't find them dreams put aside until, until later but hope hangs around someday, someday being said then someday comes health gone arthritis comes lingers, destroys enthusiasm gets lost along the way did someone else grab it maybe it just scattered to the wind

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Ayesha Iqbal

Date: 12/11/2023 11:32:00 PM

A really heartfelt poem, presented so well.. congratulations to you for this well deserved placement in the contest.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2023 3:54:00 AM

Thank you, Ayesha. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. Sara K

Jay Narain

Date: 12/11/2023 9:17:00 AM

A realistic life story in poem. Nice to see you win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/11/2023 2:19:00 PM

Why, thank you, Jay. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/10/2023 6:13:00 AM

Very well written Sara. Congratulations for your win :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 8:35:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi, for dropping by with congratulations and a smiley face. Sara K

Charles Messina

Date: 12/10/2023 4:27:00 AM

Very creative write, Sara. I enjoyed this poem... "Scattered to the wind" Belated Congrats on your win in the contest! ~Charlie

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 5:53:00 AM

Why, thank you, Charlie. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/10/2023 1:53:00 AM

So happy to see this getting placed dear sara. I knew this would do well. Congratulations on your well deserved win

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 3:20:00 AM

I am delighted that you thought so highly of it, IE. I appreciate the visit with congrats. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 12/9/2023 8:27:00 PM

"dreams put aside until, until later but hope hangs around". This is life, especially when we age. Much truth in what you have said. Congratulations dear Sara on your well deserved win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/10/2023 3:19:00 AM

Valsa, thank you for dropping by with congratulations on my poem. I appreciate you letting me know it placed. Sara K

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/5/2023 4:44:00 AM

And this echoes of many peoples experience Sara, a thought evoking write, We will only know The best once Jesus reigns, upon our plane of Life, although indeed He reigns now, the ether Is clouded by the deathly physicallity we know So much of, God bless and best for the season.'

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2023 5:16:00 AM

Thank you, Joe, for the season's greetings. Yes, someday God will reign on earth like He does in some hearts today and at that time all our dreams will come true or if they were wrong dreams they won't matter. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/4/2023 11:30:00 PM

Those somedays actually never come.. We only keep creating dreams but never taking actions to weave them in reality or many times our circumstances don't let us.. And then finally the hope & wishes get scattered to the wind.. I really like the design of this poem & how you've written this in such a captivating way.. Deeply resonating as well! When enthusiasm & desire fade, you've expressed this emotion so well!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/5/2023 5:14:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya for the visit and taking time to comment on my work. Sara

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 4:58:00 PM

the perfect title and structure that matches the message you're conveying. There's a sad reality to losing dreams, losing enthusiasm, etc., that comes as we each go through aging...it's tough on even the hardiest of us. I'm faving this one...enjoy your evening, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/4/2023 2:50:00 AM

I am honored that you would fav it, Sara B. Thank you for stopping by and taking time to read and comment. Sara K

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/3/2023 11:44:00 AM

Getting old people say is not for sissys. so true I saw my mom shrivel away after two falls which resulted in huge bed sores, she was 84 years iof age when she passed. We all have our time and it will come but I Dont want to know when. my Dad did at 67 due to bronchial asthma. your poem is earth shaking almost a prophesy. So well written. I've been busy with Proto Personnel - have to cut myself in two! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 4:42:00 PM

Yes, Jennifer, getting old is not for sissies. I had COVID a little over 2 years ago and I have gone downhill since then and can't seem to get back to where I was before. I had the kind that effected my stomach with vomiting and diarrhea, and I am still plagued with episodes. Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K

Deb M

Date: 12/3/2023 7:02:00 AM

Sara….such truth in this relatable poem! Beautifully written! Debx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 7:35:00 AM

Yes, some people will understand it, Deb. Thanks for the beautifully written. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 12/3/2023 4:39:00 AM

I love how your words look like they are drifting in the wind too. And how your words flow explaining drying of dreams when challenges get in the way and when enthusiasm slowly fades. I can imagine the pain, and health issues can be disheartening dear sara. This will do well in brians contest i think, sending you light always dear sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 7:35:00 AM

Thank you, IE. I can't remember if I entered it or not. Maybe it was another one that I entered. LOL..Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 4:02:00 AM

A very creative way to do your verse poem.. I think we all think and worry about our age and how we will be in the future and you have captured that in your poem..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2023 4:13:00 AM

SO, aging is hard, scary, and definitely undisciplined. We do not know what the future holds but we know who holds the future. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K