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Scattered Arc and A Life

An angel's carpet dream woven in the sky; amidst the clouds a true utopian abode, a perfect oddity Somewhere on the monochrome rainbow little miss sunshine cry failed to awe the morning blend And the human, waits. for the clarity of their mind, a manifestation of eternal question

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Date: 9/20/2013 7:27:00 PM
After reading your haiku, I couldn't get enough of your poetry, I came across this one and, WOW you blew my heart away with this powerful and beautiful poem!!! I love the last three lines, so well written and so true! I sometimes sit and wonder with a clarity in mind, the eternal question of life! Great write! Signing off the Blue Poet. Keep on writing, and I shall keep on reading! xoxo :)
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Date: 9/19/2013 5:02:00 AM
I haven't seen you around in quite awhile Shirley. I'm glad that you stopped by in one of my poem's. It was a pleasure to hear from you. Your poem is really gorgeous Shirley, it makes the reader think. Well done!
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Date: 9/20/2013 2:11:00 PM
Thank you for your warm greeting, M :) Yeah it's been a while...I missed this community so much!
Date: 8/15/2013 11:56:00 PM
Wow sublime in poetic query n penning! And we can guess d answers. Do pas by mine latest too pleez. Tc.
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:42:00 AM
Beautiful & thought-provoking. Oh, how can all use a little more clarity in our conundrums of life. Excellent work, my PS!
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