Scattered Arc and a Life

An angel's carpet dream
woven in the sky; amidst the clouds
a true utopian abode, a perfect oddity

Somewhere on the monochrome rainbow
little miss sunshine cry
failed to awe the morning blend

And the human, waits.
for the clarity of their mind,
a manifestation of eternal question
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Boskovski Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 7:27 PM
After reading your haiku, I couldn't get enough of your poetry, I came across this one and, WOW you blew my heart away with this powerful and beautiful poem!!! I love the last three lines, so well written and so true! I sometimes sit and wonder with a clarity in mind, the eternal question of life! Great write! Signing off the Blue Poet. Keep on writing, and I shall keep on reading! xoxo :)
Mohammed Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 5:02 AM
I haven't seen you around in quite awhile Shirley. I'm glad that you stopped by in one of my poem's. It was a pleasure to hear from you. Your poem is really gorgeous Shirley, it makes the reader think. Well done!
Candy Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Thank you for your warm greeting, M :) Yeah it's been a while...I missed this community so much!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 11:56 PM
Wow sublime in poetic query n penning! And we can guess d answers. Do pas by mine latest too pleez. Tc.
Tacito Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:42 AM
Beautiful & thought-provoking. Oh, how can all use a little more clarity in our conundrums of life. Excellent work, my PS!
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