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Scathing Remembrances

Tainted one's brain remains When scathing remembrances it contains Due diligence when not fulfilled Leave one in a state of surreal In love matters, bitter the pill If swallowed it will kill memories of love gone unfulfilled Thoughts unrequired must yield

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 5/3/2019 12:14:00 PM

Fell in this right away, fell in because I felt I belonged at home in each sentiment. Love brevity delivering profound and that's what you did. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Michael Craig
Date: 5/14/2019 1:22:00 PM

Hello CayCay, Thank you. I really appreciate your critiques of my work. But, I want you to be honest, not that you aren't, say what comes to your mind negative or positive. Thank you again. - Mike

Eve Roper

Date: 4/15/2019 2:01:00 PM

Michael, like the rhyme verse.. The heart or is it the brain that runs the emotions of the heart.. the brain remembers and the body reacts to the thoughts ... I wonder.. I lost my husband 7 months ago and the images of him run like a movie that I love to watch over and over. Then the tears flow then the body reacts to the feelings of a hug long gone.. just food for thought..I do know my blood pressure did go up sky high after his death , but now has calmed

Michael Craig
Date: 4/17/2019 9:26:00 AM

I so sorry for your loss. I believe your right brain not heart. If you don't mind I will use your suggestion. Thank you - Eve