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Scary Eyes

I’m breathing not enough to let this go. I’m sighing with the strength I do not possess. I’m waking to this sky of black and gold and scary eyes. I’m shaking fiercely so that I can barely type these words. I’m writing clumsy nothings to make this feeling known… But you, you jump on my brittle bones that can not with stand the force. But you, you scrape my soul of everything it was. But you, you are deciding my fate; I am impatient for my death; dear Lord, I can not wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/25/2016 11:08:00 PM
EMILY, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 3/28/2010 2:03:00 PM
Terrifying happening and conclusion..I wish you a joyfull life. Light & Love
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Date: 3/28/2010 10:36:00 AM
"you" is my illness, bipolar... I write about "you" in my other poem Seether: What's Yours is Mine. Thanks for your great comment though. It means a lot. :)
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Date: 3/28/2010 9:32:00 AM
great writing...would you care to divulge who "You" is?
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Date: 3/27/2010 7:36:00 PM
Sad poem, do be too eager, you would be missed.
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