Scars

How more beautifully can i describe you?
An etetnal bliss
That gleaming sun or a night of wonder.
Baby, you are beautiful,
How can i describe this feeling? 
Feeling of being miserable, helpless in front of those eyes
The pain and ache of distance
The long and crave for closeness 
 What Kills me, is this restlessness 
U see the calm but can't fathom that storm
U are still that fragile blooming in the midst of my barren land
I pour my blood to quench your thirst
Can't see anymore in the dark yet this light blinds me
Don't leave me all alone, I can't breathe
U promised u would stay, this is how you deceive
I open my eyes, see you beside me
Seems like a distant dream 
I can't sleep,afraid to dream that dream
My heart cries for that addiction 
My brain demands your redemption 
Yet i wake up, with a coffee and gaze out of the window
Waiting to be mesmerized by a 'hello'
How can i describe this feeling?
You see me and wave that warmth
I fly with the love and you become my wings
I can't help but smile at your every silly move, 
U hold my hand and get me pirouetting, 
I lay in your arms and you whisper in my ears
Then all of a sudden, you realize
You don't have enough time, you leave without a kiss
And an evanescent moment of recurring pain
Shimmered with love.
I keep weeping in the cold, waiting for you
Looking for an apprehension, 
Looking for salvation.
Can't save myself, can't give up on you
Ruthless yet charismatic 
How more beautifully can i describe you?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 4/19/2017 10:08:00 AM
You never had one comment on this beautiful poem, and that is not deserved. You write wonderfully, and this is so lovingly and tender. And the imagery is fantastic. An absolute litte gem of a poem, and you get a 7 from me.
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