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Scars

A part of me is you Fueled with passion Yet Wild and restless.. A part of you is missing It's kept safe with me The scar which you gave me Has grown into ...a poisonous tree Red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/10/2016 7:51:00 AM
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Well worth reading this gem again.
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/30/2016 5:00:00 PM
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Both of you still own parts of one another....the good, the bad, and the ugly. In the end we are left wondering, not just about the scar, but even more about the poisonous tree! Clearly it's memories and remnants of a broken relationship. #7 hugs // paul
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John-Ovan.P. Hull
Date: 3/12/2016 10:12:00 AM
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Such pain and loss can seem beautiful from the right pen.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/8/2016 9:53:00 PM
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Wasn't expecting that last line. Possibly warm memories but tinged with darkness and a constant reminder ... the scar. Your poem is written in a way that it can be taken a couple different ways (depending on the reader) ... mysterious but not overly enigmatic. Well written, Red.
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:05:00 PM
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A mixture of emotions, you can say...I wrote this poem when I was so depressed...:(...memories can also effect your present state...
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Karen Anglesey
Date: 11/10/2013 10:28:00 AM
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Very creative. Taking on the pain of someone else can be a painful experience. Well done :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 11/10/2013 2:00:00 AM
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Oh scarred nerves poem, like dark love, sweet poison, bittersweet, i get it! Amazing poem. Pls coment my latest poem too.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2013 6:12:00 PM
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Lots to ponder here Red. Thanks for adding some Hot Sauce to the soup.
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/10/2016 8:06:00 PM
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:)...thank u for always encouraging me..love and peace ..Red

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