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SCARLET WAYS giving suck to a brood of starving stars voices flush out the debris of your soul as you try to rip the satin from my mouth which will not swing the way you know… they are resigned to things you may never probe lonely again I lay down in my hair and say…. ‘Gondolier’ as you try to range your mind North… but my arrow is out as I learn more from missing when I miss and we break off the arms of our statues © Kim van Breda—23 December 2015

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Date: 12/26/2015 4:30:00 PM
Ha, Thank you for understanding Kim, you've always been great to me. I'll never forget the first time you comment my poem. If memory serves me right, a friend introduced you to this site. Thanks for the reply on the bottom. LINDA
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Date: 12/25/2015 9:43:00 PM
WOW, I miss reading your poems Kim,, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year May all your days shine and dreams come true. :) Every day should be a day with family and friends. I appreciate everyone. Sorry to all those I have taken for granted. SHAME ON ME. I promise, 2016 will be a new me. Merry Christmas!!! May the true meaning of the holiday season fill your heart and home. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/26/2015 2:45:00 PM
Hiya Linda. Thank you... and a Blessed Christmas and 2016 to you and yours too. We all 'err' on the side of neglecting friends and family. I think our intentions are good... our time is misplaced :) ~~X~~