Scarlet Liquid,Crystal Kiss

Another sip is taken,a cigarette burns away unattended
Cheers to the scarlet liquid,and the sorrow that consented
To the time spent dancing my lips,on the rim of a crystal kiss
Freefalling tears so warm,how appropriate for times like this

Lying here on satin sheets,flesh adorned in burgundy lace
I long for the smooth caress, of forgiveness in an embrace
With my every faltered breath,though more like a naked sigh
I release my pain in silent tears,in hope this hurt will say goodbye

Slowly casting guilt filled eyes,around this room,until they fall
Upon the candlelit silhouette,of the ghosts from tears before
Distant are the smiles,nearer to me now is deep despair
And to this empty feeling,only your death could compare

I play my tear kissed lips,upon the crystal,now refilled
And in the silence of my grieving,my breath is almost stilled
Watching as sheer curtains,dance before a pale moonlight
I stay this way,alone and lost,trapped in the dark of night

Another sip is taken,a cigarette burns away unattended
Cheers to the scarlet liquid,and the sorrow that consented
To the time spent dancing my lips,on the rim of a crystal kiss
Freefalling tears so warm,how appropriate for times like this

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/7/2010 4:23:00 PM
Exceptional poem Chenoa, another gem from a gifted pen >> James
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Date: 4/6/2010 4:11:00 AM
Deep moving , well presented , piece , Chenoa, so you , write onnnnnn ....
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Date: 4/5/2010 8:43:00 PM
It is wonderful here so far and I am enjoying the reading a lot! My appreciation to all of you xx
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:09:00 AM
such a passionate write, we think a lot im sure, love the flow and meaning, wonderfully written
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Date: 4/3/2010 1:39:00 PM
Great lonely and sad write with the possiboity of love gone bad...Very expressive and emotive with some great metaphoric language used...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..."The Wild Open Woods"...Sara
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Date: 4/3/2010 11:26:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chenoa. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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