Scared Love

She was like an ocean
He loved her waves
But was to afraid to swim
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sands Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 1:03 PM
I like this one. It says so much with so few words. Powerful.
Muideen Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 12:27 PM
Let the swim begin my friend, don't afraid, put faith forth. Well penned.........A.M.
Edwards-Gregory Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 10:02 AM
Like this one. So much said in short.
Henderson Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 9:14 AM
Only if he is dim. Chessy smile. Peace and many blessings to you Sofia.
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