Scared

I have hardly ever been been so scared I was waiting and waiting,thinking nobody cared I know they dont know me, but I thought they'd reply Just let me know that my babe was okay But nobody answered, nobody called I was just about climbing the bloody wall Then he came online,and my heart overflowed The relief that I felt, I never have known After all the worry and texts and time The problem was caused by a damn faulty line!!!!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/9/2024 7:44:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 1:34:00 PM

jane, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 3:09:00 PM

Jane, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT