Scar Pt1

Reaching for my favorite shirt and the iron-warming
Starched and ironed, complete with those creases that cut
It was made for me and handsome.
And you and your brown eyes and irony when angry
Irony and starched and those same creases
Our joy, crushed yet alive and waiting
And the fabric of those brown eyes
They are frayed with holes and still, I starch and iron
Maybe if looked deeply you can see me and the creases
The scar is from that knife wound I gave you
You are proud of the stitching, and your head held high
I feel sad when I see the sutures   on your chest
You wear them like a pair of worn slippers
They hurt the eye, but they keep your feet warm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Drago Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Patrick....I like the thought of "the fabric of those brown eyes".... very nicely done with comparing things.. Louis Drago
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 5:40 AM
Whoa!..Very expressive and emotive work..I hope not based on life but just imagination from what one sees around ....Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Collins Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Patrick, What a poem! Hot irons can be very dangerous. My husband and I finally learned to drip dry; fewer wrinkles. I sent you an e-mail.
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March 22, 2012 at 11:50 AM
very lovely take care always p.d.
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