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Scar of a Fallen Angel

there is nothing more beautiful than the scar of a fallen angel- in broken ivory feathers cloaked, wrapped in a veil of mending sutures; as she sits, her head down- clenched fists... awaiting someone to heal her wound as she deserves her honey-hazel eyes as frail as October, barren skin iridescently tender, an aria of her melody exclaims what she felt like that night- the fear of falling unwillingly, the wonder of what will become of life, or death, or both though woe was worn and her heart torn, she saw the ebullience in her wound- the way her scar shined was a marvel, a PERFECT flaw worn in the dark of night though she’s wounded in ways the heavens cannot heal from afar- there’s nothing more lovely than a fallen angel’s beautiful scar February 9, 2018

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Date: 1/26/2020 5:53:00 PM
Laura perfect! This as always was an amazing write! Congrats on your top win!;)
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Date: 2/10/2018 2:19:00 AM
Wow. That is awesome. Sad, like real life and yet hopeful. 'Scars of a fallen angel', 'ivory feathers', wrapped in mending sutures'. Great
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Date: 2/9/2018 9:54:00 PM
Your poem touches deep inside, Laura. As so many of your creations do.
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Date: 2/9/2018 8:31:00 PM
sad but also encouraging to know we have such a healer, ready to help at the moment we call. Great read this late evening.
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