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Scar and Scare

Another Bleak Candid Dreamy Evening Fades, And the house of cards that stands on a tip Slowly crashes, through the time flip And first falls the heart and then two spades making the roof. Leaning, Meddling, Nodding On Purpose I have cared, pretended tried it all ways But anger, ego, disagreement surpass My growing fear of losing him in days. Plenty Questions Return Skimming Through Under From the deep traces of mind that lay bare A falling house, find excuses of wind and thunder But times heals, the initial scar and scare. 26.07.2021

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Date: 8/9/2021 6:48:00 AM
Very nicely penned Dyuti, Congrats on your win
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Dyuti Biswas
Date: 8/9/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thank you so much. I had fun writing. Have a nice day. __Dyuti
Date: 8/8/2021 3:26:00 PM
Dyuti, congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/8/2021 6:14:00 PM
Thank you Eve. Lots of love. Have a great day! __Dyuti
Date: 8/8/2021 3:31:00 AM
Hi Dyuti, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/8/2021 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. Have a nice day. _Dyuti
Date: 8/2/2021 11:04:00 AM
Beautiful distinction and well-composed.
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Date: 8/8/2021 3:48:00 AM
Thank you so much. Have a nice day. _Dyuti

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