Scar and Scare

Another Bleak Candid Dreamy Evening Fades, 
And the house of cards that stands on a tip
Slowly crashes, through the time flip
And first falls the heart and then two spades making the roof. 

Leaning, Meddling, Nodding On Purpose
I have cared, pretended tried it all ways
But anger, ego, disagreement surpass
My growing fear of losing him in days. 

Plenty Questions Return Skimming Through Under
From the deep traces of mind that lay bare
A falling house, find excuses of wind and thunder
But times heals, the initial scar and scare. 

26.07.2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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May Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 6:48 AM
Very nicely penned Dyuti, Congrats on your win
Biswas Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Thank you so much. I had fun writing. Have a nice day. __Dyuti
Roper Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 3:26 PM
Dyuti, congratulations on your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
Biswas Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 6:14 PM
Thank you Eve. Lots of love. Have a great day! __Dyuti
Y. Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 3:31 AM
Hi Dyuti, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Biswas Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. Have a nice day. _Dyuti
Alex Avatar
August 2, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Beautiful distinction and well-composed.
Biswas Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 3:48 AM
Thank you so much. Have a nice day. _Dyuti
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