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In Loving Memory of: Capt.Gary Cobban Jr., David Cobban, Seth Rousseau-Gano, Arthur Ganacias, Brock Rainey

Scandies Rose

Will you remain with us, Scandies Rose?
We'll always be your rugged salty crew,
chapped by the ocean's kiss.
You were our mainstay and our vessel,
you faded down the depths with us.
The sea with her surface of blue glass,
of swells of tempests-
Our sweet Rose,
twenty foot seas and icing,
forty mile per hour winds.
You were listing on your starboard side,
and now the oceanic beauty has our bodies
in her tidal bosom.
The sun gifts the brine golden,
yet, there was never a promise to return to
a misty welcoming harbor.

Neath eve stars,
our wives awakening from dreams without
rest.
Our children's faces stream with tears
trickling down into the receiving seas of
our spirits.
Will the mysteries, the finality of the deep
turn them to another life on land?

In the moss-green waves,
in the seabird's cries our souls
are sealed.
Yet, Poseidon's loss,
as we are everlasting sons
of our Lord's keep. ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Mashina Avatar
September 3, 2024 at 5:45 AM
A heartfelt and reverent reflection on the true meaning of Christmas. Beautifully expressed!, Frank
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September 3, 2024 at 5:39 AM
Brian, your poem beautifully illustrates the journey from melancholy to renewed zest, using the metaphor of a telescope to highlight the shift in perspective. The imagery and structure effectively convey the theme of finding relief and clarity through life's changes. Well done!. I love it!, Frank
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September 3, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Gary and Liam, this piece powerfully conveys the struggle with despair and the enduring possibility of hope. Your vivid imagery and reflection on human resilience are both moving and encouraging. Well done!, Frank
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September 3, 2024 at 5:28 AM
Your poem captures the struggle with memories and the sense of loss beautifully. The imagery of grasping and drowning adds depth to the emotion. Well done!, Frank
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September 3, 2024 at 5:22 AM
This is a hauntingly beautiful and poignant tribute, Regina. The imagery of the ocean's power and the connection between the crew, their vessel, and the sea is deeply moving. You've captured both the harshness and beauty of life at sea, as well as the heart-wrenching sorrow of those left behind. The spiritual undertones offer a sense of peace amidst the tragedy. Truly a powerful and evocative piece—well done!
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September 3, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Thank you so very much, Frank. It's so kind of you to stop by and give me such a generous review. Have a restful evening.
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