Saying No To the Devil

I was traveling down the road one starless night
Looking for some peace of mind to set me right
When who should block my path but Lucifer himself
He cackled at me vainly from his hillside shelf

"Oh child" he said "things will be fine if this you'll do-
Give me your soul and you can start your life anew"
He raised his pitchfork-with a smile began to hiss
I got lost for a moment as I pondered this

I thought about his offer but my heart told me
If I gave my soul to him I'd never again be free
For a time my troubles certainly would quell
But someday I'd have to endure the flames of Hell

He wasn't happy with my answer I must say
Screamed and cursed my name as I began to pray







**for contest The Devil Made Me Do It

sponsored by Thvia Shetley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 5:13 AM
wow nothing else to say my friend but wow thank you duncan
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October 10, 2010 at 4:36 PM
It seems some folks place little value on their souls, Deb, but I'm glad you're not one of them! Have you read "The Devil and Daniel Webster"? Jabez Stone sold his soul and Webster successfully defended him against a jury comprised other souls who had succumbed to the devil's temptations. Really like your approach to the contest. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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