Saying Good-Bye

My heart plummets as torrents of rain
Beat against my foggy window
Pummeling the glass as I
Stare at the phone

You said you'd call and now it's been
Days since you said good-bye
Leaving me to pine away
The long hard hours

Is your imprint on somebody's sheets
Your sights on someone new?
You're breaking my heart
Just don't do it

I gaze at the walls as they close in
With each hour you disappear
From my heart and soul
Farewell my love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chappell Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 5:06 AM
i feel this peace so much my friend thank you duncan
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