Anna Ruiz Poet Haiku

Sayanora

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moon face over
Mt. Fuji
weeping





Will this suffice for contest re Japan?


I have a problem with the original symbols for mountains--two black triangles are now two question marks.  HELP!

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Wilma Neels May 23, 2011 at 5:22 AM Stunning haiku Anna and thank you for the suggestion...

Dr.Ram Mehta May 8, 2011 at 8:09 AM The most condensed and pregnant with meaning a few can convey, Anna

Anna Ruiz May 8, 2011 at 6:42 AM Thanks for the read. I think, the less that is said about such devastation, the more the visuals speak. ~A

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2011 at 6:37 PM Anna, nice image...take care,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2011 at 6:30 PM Anna, good luck in the contest.. tears, but god has to give happy endings.. enjoyed.. , Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p