Say It's So -- In Triplets

No more snow
     Say it's so
     Make it go!

     Rubbed my eyes
     Big surprise
     Sunny skies

     Big windfall
     Had a ball
     That ain't all

     Ate a steak
     Bite of cake
     Downed milkshake

     Took a swim
     Hit the gym
     Slim and trim

     Willpower
     For an hour
     Then a shower

     Disneyland
     Beach 'n sand
     Got a tan ~

     Out of steam
     This a dream?
     Gonna scream ~

     No more snow
     Make it go
     Say it's so!


    ________________ 
    Threes, not twos
    Triplets i/o duets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/11/2021 4:28:00 PM
Hello Gershon … I was thinking along the lines of Bob. I think you may have started something new - well done Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2021 5:05:00 PM
Yes, indeed -- Tri-doodles, I'd like to call them. Thanks, Lindsay! :) gw
Date: 2/10/2021 10:15:00 AM
Love it, Gershon! You've created a new poetic form - shall we call it a Tri-ootle?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:49:00 PM
Bob, I love your suggestion. And I'd like to add a 'D' to make it 'Tri-Doodle.' What say you?! Thanks, Gershon
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