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Say It's So -- In Triplets

No more snow Say it's so Make it go! Rubbed my eyes Big surprise Sunny skies Big windfall Had a ball That ain't all Ate a steak Bite of cake Downed milkshake Took a swim Hit the gym Slim and trim Willpower For an hour Then a shower Disneyland Beach 'n sand Got a tan ~ Out of steam This a dream? Gonna scream ~ No more snow Make it go Say it's so! ________________ Threes, not twos Triplets i/o duets

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Date: 2/11/2021 4:28:00 PM
Hello Gershon … I was thinking along the lines of Bob. I think you may have started something new - well done Gershon - Lindsay
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2021 5:05:00 PM
Yes, indeed -- Tri-doodles, I'd like to call them. Thanks, Lindsay! :) gw
Date: 2/10/2021 10:15:00 AM
Love it, Gershon! You've created a new poetic form - shall we call it a Tri-ootle?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/10/2021 5:49:00 PM
Bob, I love your suggestion. And I'd like to add a 'D' to make it 'Tri-Doodle.' What say you?! Thanks, Gershon

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