Unseeking Seeker Poet Ottava rima

Say it like it is

It is pointless to negate the here now this,
for no matter what be our recognition,
we cannot deny divine energised bliss,
brought about by kundalini ignition,
caress sublime borne by Divine Mother’s kiss,
where those with pure hearts have right of admission.
Rapture renewal is the name of the game,
embodied in our heart as our claim to fame.

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Alison A Smith September 1, 2026 at 5:08 PM This is a beautifully written Ottava Rima! You executed the classic ABABABCC rhyme scheme flawlessly while delivering a deeply uplifting message. The phrasing around the "kundalini ignition" and the "Divine Mother's kiss" perfectly captures that profound sense of radiant spiritual joy and rapture. Thank you for sharing such an inspiring and peaceful piece! Unseeking Seeker September 1, 2026 at 6:24 PM Thank you, Alison. I’m delighted these words resonated in your glowing heart.