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Say It Ain'T So

I sought knowledge I acquired wealth I raised a family I met my spiritual obligations and paid my social dues, Is this all there’s to life? Say O Lord, it ain’t so! I broke no hearts I brokered no dubious deals I was faithful to my vows and lived within my means; Is this all there’s to life? Say O Lord, it ain’t so! I dabbled in all forms of art and savored classical music, Jazz, Rap and Rock n ’Roll I immersed myself in the world of literature, I traveled to all the shores of the earth; Is this all there’s to life? Say O Lord, it ain’t so. I dove deep into the murky depth of envy, I wallowed in the muck of self-pity, I have flown high on the wings of love and descended into the pits of hatred and jealousy; Methinks there ain’t much else If life can be summed up merely-- A tear here and a smile there, A fall here and a rise there, A melody here and a grunt there, A sin here and a pardon there, A peace here and a conflict there, A life here and a death there... I pray, O Lord…say it ain’t so! ~02/23/17 ~Your Best poem in the last year contest by Silent One

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Date: 2/10/2018 5:47:00 AM
Love this brilliant poem my friend. Much wisdom displayed and a positive look at life , if one but asks why.. A fav..
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Date: 2/8/2018 11:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Abdul! Great choice for the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:38:00 AM
Congrats on your placement. I read your reply below and you also have an excellent sense of humour.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/6/2018 4:20:00 PM
All day, A.M or 'P.M.' Without the sense of humor, life's pretty rough; Say, isn't it so, Richter?
Date: 2/5/2018 8:36:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Abdul. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/5/2018 7:21:00 PM
Abdul, I enjoyed the deep message in your excellent and compelling poem, your last stanza is especially thought provoking. Congratulations on your fine win. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/6/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Susan. Glad you liked it.
Date: 2/5/2018 6:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Abdul. Awesome poem!
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Date: 2/5/2018 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your joint placement Abdul. Your poem most poignant for me!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/5/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Mick.
Date: 2/5/2018 3:45:00 PM
I can see whey this is your best poem it is very deep and death is always a personal subject and the poem also highlighted your life's achievents... Congratulations on your placement in the contest, I am happy you entered and the poem will be showcased..
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/5/2018 5:27:00 PM
I pray, O Silent One, is this all there's to your comment? Say, it isn't so? lol. Thanks a lot. I am so glad you liked this one. This poem sums up my concerns.

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