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saxophone

sound of blues ripples on--
smokey tunes blowing hot
sizzling flamed mood...it's jazz!
sax notes intoxicate
swirling like coltraine's grind,
soulful trance whips my breath...
spice of night,   weekend jives!

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2025

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Duke Beaufort Date: 4/10/2025 11:03:00 AM Nette you've covered a lot of musical sounds possible on this amazing instrument. It's all in who's playing it. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 4/8/2025 9:24:00 AM Dear Nette! A great celebration of jazz and the soulful atmosphere! I love the way you evoke the sensations of smokey tunes and sizzling moods, drawing me into that intoxicating world. The imagery of Coltrane's grind and the swirling sax notes feels alive and electric. You’ve captured the essence of a weekend filled with music and joy so beautifully! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/7/2025 5:03:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 4/7/2025 1:58:00 AM Loved this! Login to Reply

thriveni c mysore Date: 4/6/2025 1:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 4/5/2025 8:54:00 PM Love the last line. And Coltraine in his prime -- What an experience. ~ gw Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 4/5/2025 7:20:00 PM Do your soul a favor, dear poet, and listen to the saxophone of Gato Barbieri playing Europa...Frederic Login to Reply Nette Onclaud Date: 4/5/2025 11:03:00 PM im a sure fan of gato but i had to choose sn older man. : lol :)

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/5/2025 3:28:00 PM Your heavenly scented poetry perfume infuses my heart tonight Nette, Pefecto ! Login to Reply