Sawbones Behest

He rode a trail from out west.
Twas at the sawbone's behest.
As he turned southeast,
Ran into Cochise.
So, now He's Mincemeat, They said.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 5:21 PM
Fun one great end line
Elless Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Thank You, Andrea. Stay Creative.
Elless Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Thank You, Ink E. It is amazing. Some of the things we come up with. Have a Great Day.
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:43 AM
This is an excellent limerick. Very unique rhymes here i enjoyed reading this
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2023 at 7:26 PM
No words minced here. Graphic!
Elless Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Gershon, thank You. That is so ironic. I nearly wrote, And now He's mincemeat they said. Cochise, Mincemeat.Great Minds, Think Alike. Keep Rolling.
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Whoa!! Poor chap. Sad outcome for one cowpoke. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara
Elless Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 1:57 PM
Thank You, Sara. My pleasure. Have a Great Day.
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