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Saw the Death

relief is the highest thing to recognize to climb the height you gotta jump to the bright light or Follow a heck of a line saw the righteous turn back to sides and follow the roads into the light certain people will follow the light till found the thing we called sacrifice mountains will crumble Dry eyes will shed tears until it's dry the night don't give up even though you can't hold the line seek the interval of the night you will see the hope seeking you through the life

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Date: 10/24/2023 5:21:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Avisha Rasminda
Date: 10/24/2023 5:47:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment on this, really glad to hear this. thank you again. Have a great days ahead.
Date: 10/22/2023 10:41:00 PM
love the last line!
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:36:00 AM
Such bravery bestowed before me. Yes, relief is wonderful! It can be pure joy to relieve the bad. Thank you!
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Avisha Rasminda
Date: 10/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
Thank You. Happy to hear this kind of comments from the people.

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