Saw the Death

relief is the highest thing to recognize 
to climb the height 
you gotta jump to the bright light 
or
Follow a heck of a line 
saw the righteous turn back to sides and follow the roads into the light 
certain people will follow the light 
till found the thing 
we called sacrifice
mountains will crumble 
Dry eyes will shed tears 
until it's dry the night 
don't give up even though 
you can't hold the line 
seek the interval of the night 
you will see the hope seeking you through the life
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:21:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:47:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment on this, really glad to hear this. thank you again. Have a great days ahead.
Date: 10/22/2023 10:41:00 PM
love the last line!
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
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Date: 10/22/2023 10:36:00 AM
Such bravery bestowed before me. Yes, relief is wonderful! It can be pure joy to relieve the bad. Thank you!
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Date: 10/24/2023 5:49:00 AM
Thank You. Happy to hear this kind of comments from the people.
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