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Savoring Sun

It disappeared from sky while locked inside No squinting back at light No one longs for more, than those who are deprived Warmth on skin, bronzing tone Brings to life, melting snow Nurtures leaves as they grow Blooms return as it conquers cold Shadows cast are welcomed back Waking day dispels the black Children play in stretching days Beach sand warms to shining rays. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Memories flood with everlasting summer.... Rising just behind you....setting as we watched Smells of aloe soothed my reddened skin I only cursed you for melting my ice cream Torturing ants with magnifying glass... ...sadistic children giggled in delight We loathed the night, called back inside Each day running into your welcoming arms Inspired by Christie Moses' "Soul of the Sun" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/4/2009 7:54:00 AM
Dear Steve - Congratulations on your WIN in Christie's contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:49:00 PM
Ah yes, the days of merrimental blissfulness. How I sometimes sink into such thoughts. Beautifully written Steve. Well deserve win.-Always Alexandra
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Date: 2/25/2009 12:10:00 PM
That ending verse overwhelmed me with memories. Congrats Steve on your awesome and well deserved win in Christie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/25/2009 11:35:00 AM
A wonderful poem and well deserving to be among the chosen poems for Christie's contest! Congratulations, Steve!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/25/2009 8:34:00 AM
Steve congratulations on placing in Christie's contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/15/2009 7:47:00 PM
(following instead of floowing)
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Date: 2/14/2009 4:06:00 PM
Excellent job, memories of childhood, and the days in the sun...all the bad (melting the ice cream/torturing ants...) and all the good...loving the sunshine. Great job! Good luck! ~ Carrie
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