Savoring Starlight

In restless dreams I sail the night on celestial seas,
starlight serving as my guide on uncharted course.
I explore constellations with consummate expertise,
shared as a secret, but I'll never reveal my source.
My mentor is an impressive sage, a tour de force.

Some nights I fly around the moon with canvas wings,
landing on her surface for a brief respite in the night,
then journey, searching for love, around Saturn's rings
for a handsome dreamer, a gallant captain or a knight
to soar through galaxies with me when we take flight.

I've yet to find a seraphic to ignite my stellar flare.
My dreams may become a scrapbook of sad souvenirs
unless I find an elixir that will lead me to love's lair.
Until then I'll drink bitter wine, infused with my tears.
Where must my search continue, for how many years?

I shall savor the flavor of starlight while I am dreaming.
Thirst quenched in the waters during the moon's eclipse.
I hope to find a lover at my side, his sultry eyes gleaming,
whispering sensuous words before I surrender my lips.
I long to be seduced and caressed by his warm fingertips.



March 8, 2022
Quintain (English) Contest
Sponsored by Emile Pinet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 3/27/2022 5:32:00 PM
Hello Jenna ... I enjoyed reading your rhyme scheme and the trip through the universe in search for your dream - thank you Jenna - Lindsay
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:32:00 AM
Hi Lindsay. Thank you for such wonderful compliments.
Date: 3/19/2022 2:23:00 PM
Great inspiring piece Jenna, super rhyme and flow with amazing imagery and real insightfulness too. Hope all is well, blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 3/29/2022 6:32:00 AM
All is well with me, Gordon, and I hope the same with you. Thanks for liking this one.
Date: 3/17/2022 9:50:00 PM
"My dreams may become a scrapbook of sad souvenirs" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM
Thank you, Chris.
Date: 3/17/2022 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, due to the technical demands of this form it was a difficult contest to both enter and judge, very well done my friend, Emile.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for honoring these lines, Emile.
Date: 3/13/2022 6:16:00 PM
Powerful ink Jenna! That’s quite a journey
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM
Thanks, Mark.
Date: 3/13/2022 12:47:00 PM
Such exquisite imagery and rhyme Jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 3/13/2022 9:03:00 AM
Jenna, your Starlight Serenade is just stunning to read and feel and contemplate! So sensual and romantic! Happy Sunday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:30:00 AM
and your remarks are so delightful to read. Thanks, Mike.
Date: 3/8/2022 4:04:00 PM
Quite a dreamy and romantic verse Jenna, your pen is on fire of late, I thought you were going away. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 4:18:00 PM
I leave tomorrow for 9 days so I busied myself spitting out a few things in the last few days. I’ll check In, But won’t have time to write. Thanks for the comments and remembering my travels.
Date: 3/8/2022 2:41:00 PM
Another first-rate production from the pen of an exquisite poet. My, you do have a way with words, Jenna. I particularly love "My dreams may become a scrapbook of sad souvenirs." Interesting thought. I can relate.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 3:06:00 PM
You flatter my pen with gracious compliments, Milt. Thank you as ever...
Date: 3/8/2022 1:36:00 PM
that's quite good!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 3:05:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Jeff.
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