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Savoring Starlight

In restless dreams I sail the night on celestial seas, starlight serving as my guide on uncharted course. I explore constellations with consummate expertise, shared as a secret, but I'll never reveal my source. My mentor is an impressive sage, a tour de force. Some nights I fly around the moon with canvas wings, landing on her surface for a brief respite in the night, then journey, searching for love, around Saturn's rings for a handsome dreamer, a gallant captain or a knight to soar through galaxies with me when we take flight. I've yet to find a seraphic to ignite my stellar flare. My dreams may become a scrapbook of sad souvenirs unless I find an elixir that will lead me to love's lair. Until then I'll drink bitter wine, infused with my tears. Where must my search continue, for how many years? I shall savor the flavor of starlight while I am dreaming. Thirst quenched in the waters during the moon's eclipse. I hope to find a lover at my side, his sultry eyes gleaming, whispering sensuous words before I surrender my lips. I long to be seduced and caressed by his warm fingertips. March 8, 2022 Quintain (English) Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/27/2022 5:32:00 PM

Hello Jenna ... I enjoyed reading your rhyme scheme and the trip through the universe in search for your dream - thank you Jenna - Lindsay

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:32:00 AM

Hi Lindsay. Thank you for such wonderful compliments.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/19/2022 2:23:00 PM

Great inspiring piece Jenna, super rhyme and flow with amazing imagery and real insightfulness too. Hope all is well, blessings always, Gordon

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:32:00 AM

All is well with me, Gordon, and I hope the same with you. Thanks for liking this one.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 9:50:00 PM

"My dreams may become a scrapbook of sad souvenirs" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM

Thank you, Chris.

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/17/2022 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations Jenna! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest, due to the technical demands of this form it was a difficult contest to both enter and judge, very well done my friend, Emile.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM

Thanks for honoring these lines, Emile.

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/13/2022 6:16:00 PM

Powerful ink Jenna! That’s quite a journey

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM

Thanks, Mark.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2022 12:47:00 PM

Such exquisite imagery and rhyme Jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:31:00 AM

Thanks, Jan.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/13/2022 9:03:00 AM

Jenna, your Starlight Serenade is just stunning to read and feel and contemplate! So sensual and romantic! Happy Sunday xxoo

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/29/2022 6:30:00 AM

and your remarks are so delightful to read. Thanks, Mike.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/8/2022 4:04:00 PM

Quite a dreamy and romantic verse Jenna, your pen is on fire of late, I thought you were going away. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 4:18:00 PM

I leave tomorrow for 9 days so I busied myself spitting out a few things in the last few days. I’ll check In, But won’t have time to write. Thanks for the comments and remembering my travels.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/8/2022 2:41:00 PM

Another first-rate production from the pen of an exquisite poet. My, you do have a way with words, Jenna. I particularly love "My dreams may become a scrapbook of sad souvenirs." Interesting thought. I can relate.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 3:06:00 PM

You flatter my pen with gracious compliments, Milt. Thank you as ever...

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/8/2022 1:36:00 PM

that's quite good!

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 3:05:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Jeff.