Saviour

Our saviour The almighty Sitting on his throne Eyes narrow Arms crossed He's watching his people His love Our sins Mix in his creation Helping hand Caring words Still we taunt him He crys Knees weaken Our saviour fights for faith Our greed We take An eye for an eye Our way Our voice Turn our backs Minutes fly Time passes Evil blinded us We realize Strong regret Fall to our knees Some beg Others plead He shakes his head Stern face Black heart Saviour no more

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2014 3:20:00 PM

Jordan, mix in our creations, how it all passes by. The end, is what I'm wondering on... however, this is a xool poem... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 4/22/2014 2:19:00 PM

Jordan, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT