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Saviour

The waves are crashing down on me There is water everyone drowning me No lifeboat or hero, to save me Until I see a hand reaching out for me I arise from the water, gasping, choking I see your face hovering, showing only concern My cold ice heart melts in a moment You are the only one I see. You stroke my hair and tell me I'm all right warmth of your body, keeping me up right We are now on the shore and my eyes start to close Too exhausted, I have lost consciousness When I awake I am in the hospital I search the room, but you are not there Nobody, here and me, the bed and the empty chair You are gone, gone, but my memories of you live on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 7:53:00 AM
Nice memories of the lost love with sentimental feelings you have penned, Crystal with nice title
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:26:00 AM
Beautiful verse! Crystal! jimbo
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