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Saving the Tears

Saving all that we could, We all help like the way we should, Inspiring others to give and care, Giving the ones from the fires breathe fresh air, Ending the flames is risky and tough, Wishing for some rain can be enough, Reaching out from our hearts, Brings an entrance to a new start, Tears from a tragedy is just too much, Happy endings is the final touch.

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/3/2011 9:59:00 PM

Good rhyming and descriptiveness in this offering. Welcome to the site. I see you are off to a good start with this one.

Susan Palli

Date: 11/14/2010 1:33:00 AM

Nice one!

Karen Dominick

Date: 11/4/2010 8:00:00 AM

A moving write. Welcome to Soup! -- Best,Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 9:42:00 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Katrina. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/1/2010 2:16:00 AM

stunning poetry,karina.. congrats on being featured for this week, warmest, nette

Duncan Chappell

Date: 10/29/2010 4:22:00 AM

wonderful peace here my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2010 12:56:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest page offered to new members ..good luck if u enter ..with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/28/2010 8:22:00 AM

Very nice write on tragedy and comedy, You should have posted an entry to my contest which is over two days back, but you have good flair of writing. keep it up and look up for the contests on the soup, Katrina

Dennis Coates

Date: 10/28/2010 8:06:00 AM

i like this alot

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 10/28/2010 7:44:00 AM

Hello Katrina.I enjoyed reading this.I like the way you have shown that something good can come out of tragedy.All it needs is human care and kindness.And we have seen it shown many times,proving that there is still alot of love in the world.Thank you for your truly inspirational write. I especially love the title explained so well through your words. Love June(Sylvia)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2010 7:28:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Katrina. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol