Saving the Best for Last - Hmm

   
	      At eleven p.m., I start my day
              Thinking, maybe this is not so o.k. 

                 Since I wake up at seven 
                 Hmm, I may just reach heaven 

               A tad prematurely ~ to my dismay
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February 19, 2026 at 5:39 PM
oh dear, I get up early too...not ready to go to heaven :-)
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