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Savin' Sunshine

Sitting here over coffee
warn thoughts like smoke
filter slowly cross my mind.
Thinking of you dear
wish you were here.

Savin' sunshine darlin'
for some sunless day,
neatly filed darlin'
under "S" for stay.

sunfree verse

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Robert Lindley

August 1, 2015 at 10:45 PM

Congrats on your win!!

D.W. Rodgers

August 2, 2015 at 7:25 AM

Thanks Robert

Laura Leiser

July 30, 2015 at 2:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Dave :)

D.W. Rodgers

July 30, 2015 at 5:31 PM

Thanks Laura

Casarah Nance

July 30, 2015 at 1:41 PM

Very nice short and sweet write Dave :)

D.W. Rodgers

July 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Thanks Casarah

Jan Allison

July 30, 2015 at 4:15 AM

Beautifully penned dave many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

D.W. Rodgers

July 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM

Thanks Jan

Skat A

July 30, 2015 at 3:47 AM

Dave, Congratulations on your SHWEET Free Verse Win. **SKAT**

D.W. Rodgers

July 30, 2015 at 5:19 PM

Thanks SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

July 30, 2015 at 3:04 AM

Dave, that is amazing.... Congratulations... PD

D.W. Rodgers

July 30, 2015 at 5:19 PM

Thanks Linda

Lee Carter

July 30, 2015 at 1:05 AM

Super sweet! Congrats on your win Dave. ~lee

Andrea Dietrich

July 30, 2015 at 12:09 AM

oh my, I have to tell you that at first, I went to google to find out what Savin meant. (it's a red oak tree) and then I realized you meant savin', right? Too bad the title probably does not let you write it that way, but I wish you had used savin' inside the text. That would have made it better I think. Darlin' too! This was very cute. Congrats for the win.

D.W. Rodgers

July 30, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Guilty as charged, you're right as always my pedantic friend. http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/59653/ing-vs-in-ending And thank you for your contest.