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Saved Me With Your Love

Saved me with your love When this crazy world, just don't make sense, And the daggers wound without pretense, You came running in my defense, and saved me with your love As the cool breeze rushes through the trees, and whispers rustle through the leaves, Your hushed serenity enraptures me, and I can't get enough It's been so long since you have felt the touch, of an empathetic helping hand Your raging misery, has cost too much, but unitedly we'll make our stand The weeping willow sheds a tear for you, and green grass glistens with the morning dew These precious moments are too far and few, let's savor everyone! Together sheltered here in love's cocoon, we will find our treasured peace Dropping our anchors in new love's lagoon, that's when our cares will be released Happiness is found when we pay the price, and we're both willing to sacrifice, We will spend our lives in paradise, sharing...our precious love. John Derek Hamilton July 22,2019

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Date: 7/26/2019 4:14:00 PM
i fell in love with this poem with the vivid imagery, the morning dew glistening on the grass is how my daughter got her name (Krystyl Dawn) i have always loved the beauty that God's hand paints every day...you captured it in this piece...another beauty! making this one a favorite :) hugs
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/26/2019 5:20:00 PM
Wow thanks Sandy for your generous words and especially the fave, that means a lot to me!
Date: 7/23/2019 7:10:00 PM
What i like most in this one is all the lovely imagery . Also it's a sweet love poem.
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John Hamilton
Date: 7/23/2019 9:01:00 PM
Thanks Andrea brave first comment!

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