Saved Me With Your Love

Saved me with your love

When this crazy world, just don't make sense,
And the daggers wound without pretense,
You came running in my defense,
and saved me with your love

As the cool breeze rushes through the trees,
and whispers rustle through the leaves,
Your hushed serenity enraptures me,
and I can't get enough

It's been so long since you have felt the touch,
of an empathetic helping hand
Your raging misery, has cost too much, but
unitedly we'll make our stand

The weeping willow sheds a tear for you,
and green grass glistens with the morning dew
These precious moments are too far and few,
let's savor everyone!

Together sheltered here in love's cocoon,
we will find our treasured peace
Dropping our anchors in new love's lagoon,
that's when our cares will be released

Happiness is found when we pay the price,
and we're both willing to sacrifice,
We will spend our lives in paradise,
sharing...our precious love.


John Derek Hamilton
July 22,2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Adams Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 4:14 PM
i fell in love with this poem with the vivid imagery, the morning dew glistening on the grass is how my daughter got her name (Krystyl Dawn) i have always loved the beauty that God's hand paints every day...you captured it in this piece...another beauty! making this one a favorite :) hugs
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Wow thanks Sandy for your generous words and especially the fave, that means a lot to me!
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 7:10 PM
What i like most in this one is all the lovely imagery . Also it's a sweet love poem.
Hamilton Avatar
July 23, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Thanks Andrea brave first comment!
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