Save Time

Save time

S o what are you saving the time for exactly ?
A nother time when you might need more ?
V ery interesting thinking...but you can't
E verybody has a certain amount of time 
T o be able to bank it might be cool
I f you could take it out when you're running late
M aybe people would waste it
E ventually the rich would take it all and we'd run out of time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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August 23, 2016 at 3:33 PM
I like this very much, Tanis. What an excellent idea to save it and take it out when more is needed. I have written several poems about time. It is an excellent subject. You have done very well. An acrostic no less. Impressive!
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