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Save the Lake

A treasure of water surrounded by the mountains, Is where my jolly grandpa resides, Sea green water embellishes enchanting fountains, And, the ducks swim around water slides. The surreal vision of the majestic mountain lake, From my grandpa’s wooden home, How I wish time would apply a brake, And, I receive the freedom to roam. A horrific reality perturbs my dream, As I walk closer to the lake, Heaps of garbage block the main stream, Putting the water quality at stake. Engines of motor boats roar with might, Tourists queue up, for an adventurous ride, For fun, we sacrificed the right, Look, our lake has dried and the ducks have died. Our beautiful lake has stopped shedding tears, Now that her children are deaf and blind, Our ancestors preserved it for endless years, Shamefully, we left our duties far behind. The fishes in the lake stare at me, With the hope that their ecosystem is secure, A promise that I will make them free, And, their home clean and pure The earth beneath is slowly engulfing our lake, Punishing us for our brutal and mindless actions, When will we learn from our unforgivable mistakes? Do we wait for nature’s disastrous reactions?

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Date: 9/27/2023 8:13:00 AM
Excellent! I can visualize it as a lake, I.m familiar with.
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Aarna Pandey
Date: 9/28/2023 8:34:00 AM
I'm delighted to know you can envision the image! Happy to know you enjoyed it :D
Date: 9/27/2023 7:13:00 AM
Great advocacy poem. Love the rhyme.
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Aarna Pandey
Date: 9/27/2023 7:21:00 AM
Thank you! I’m grateful you enjoyed the text
Date: 9/26/2023 7:48:00 AM
My heart breaks to see the destruction of America's beautiful lakes. Thank you for the poem, and for bringing attention to this problem.
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Aarna Pandey
Date: 9/26/2023 9:55:00 AM
I can resonate with your feelings, it is truly heartbreaking… I look forward to creating more poetry and giving a voice to the unheard cries of the world. Have a lovely day :D
Date: 9/26/2023 7:29:00 AM
I love this poem ma'am, really touching ??. Thank you for raising the awareness with rhythmic poetry.
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Aarna Pandey
Date: 9/26/2023 9:54:00 AM
It is an honor to receive this hope from around the world!
Date: 5/6/2023 5:02:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about saving the lake through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Aarna Pandey
Date: 9/26/2023 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for welcoming me!

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