'save Room'

I remember.                                                                                                   You threw a few solid jabs 
at this dusty, old couch. 
I began to cough. 
(I even choked once or twice 
in this dust-filled air that you created.)
This is where I felt safe. 
Actually, I felt the safest.
With all of your flaws, 
your stubbornness, and Heaven! your smile...
I miss the taste.
Our memories created warm colors of harmony.                                        
I’ll never feel again. 
But I long to hear your song again.
You were a total mystery, but my favorite person.
The curiosity - alone - caressed my skin. 
(I had much smoother skin.)
Ah! 
It always felt right - right here.
We would always escape into our perfect forestry wonderland.
We kissed and then we danced each morning. 
I was free enough to write - right here. 
But it was in the dead of night, where we blossomed as one.
The power of your love moved me. 
I remember. 
It was undeniable and so overwhelming. 
But how did nearly twenty years pass us by?
(This dusty, old couch filled me with such wonder.)
To my dear, sweet John,
I know why we 'save room'. 
I know now.

Please save this room - for my love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Olor Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 8:19 AM
Aww this is so endearing,too sweet.Making me miss a lover I never even knew I had,whew. lol
Reeves Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 1:55 PM
right! lol thanks for reading
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Oh my goodness,I got lost in your poetry.My husband passed,and I miss the house.Your poem made me feel I was there again when I read your poetry.
Reeves Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 6:38 PM
first my condolences on the passing of your husband, and thank you. I am speechless. Just.. thank you!
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