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Save Me From This Ocean

Out there is a scary big black storm In here is a wide stagnant ocean What more can I ask for? Than your angelic existence to transport me with caution Over here is a narrow cave In which am trapped What I await is you to come, and save Carry me away on your tender wings that flap I don't know if you can see The way my heart beats and my passion boil But take me away from this stagnant ocean, save me Pull me out on a flight to a lively soil

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/7/2016 3:35:00 AM

Poignant and pensive. You write from the heart, Shehu. How've you been? Hope you're keeping well.

White Sage
Date: 2/7/2016 12:43:00 PM

lol, am hanging on Kim, i appreciate you coming by

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/4/2016 5:02:00 PM

Great write my friend , but you don't need to be saved from death sometimes death is a better companion than life.....beautiful write though....hugs / / :) dalia

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 9:05:00 AM

thanks Dalia

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/4/2016 2:33:00 PM

To be saved from the ocean of death... and safely kept on shore...Love your lines. We all need to be saved sometimes.

White Sage
Date: 1/5/2016 8:51:00 AM

that's right Charmaine, sometimes we just find ourselving peeking-out in search of some help, thanks for coming by Charmaine