Save Me

No one cares. Nor understands. I am trapped by my own thoughts. Never ending torture. A whole of never ending darkness. Everything is just trash! Your life. Those people who you cherish. Everything you've achieved. A pile of worthless trash! What is the meaning? Is there any? Anything? Help! Save me from this torment! Save me from this unforgiving world. For nothing can be done here. But alas, my fate is set. No path can I turn. I am a dead man walking. Only few can understand.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 9:53:00 PM

nice to see this one again, Florence. LINDA

Race Benoit

Date: 9/4/2014 8:33:00 AM

Oh I believe that plenty will be able to understand your plight, Florence. This give and take when it comes to love and the affections of the heart is usually unbalanced, with one giving more, much more than the other. Oh yes! I understand perfectly . . .

Florence Marie Alvarez

Date: 8/29/2014 8:13:00 PM

thank you so much guys... :) Will do... love lots... :))

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 7:44:00 PM

FLORENCE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 12:19:00 AM

This is such a deep powerful inspirational write! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/22/2014 5:59:00 PM

Oh I am sure many feel this! I feel this especially concerning politics, and government. Thanks for your write, and hope many more come, warm welcome to poetry soup :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2014 2:43:00 PM

Florence,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2014 11:33:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Florence Marie - I choose your first moving written poem - Well done - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)