Save Me!

Save me! Save me! I plead you!
For all the troubles, I'm going through.
The land for my clothes, the blue is my skin.
The wind is my blood, and the heat my kin.

The land that you stand on was once all mine.
But now you litter, and dirty me all the time.
My head and toe are melting, it'll leave me soon all blue.
What could happen next, you don't have a clue.

Blue is the ocean, with my children there.
The oil that you let out, kills them, leaving it all bare.
Dirty water, that's all you'll drink.
Human and life will soon reach extinction's brink.

Start saving fuel, and save me, too.
Use solar gadgets and plant trees, too.
Save Me! Save Me! I plead you,
For all the troubles, I'm going through.
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Agustin Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 10:02 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 20, 2016 at 10:20 PM
Shriyans, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 22, 2015 at 7:05 PM
S C., :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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November 13, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Congratulations on going on into the second round in soup contest..Sara
Brown Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Shriyans. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
Thomer Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 4:05 PM
so true, well written poem with a great idea. congratulations on your feature. this is going into my fave collections :). thank you for this truth, --Madison Thomer
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Shriyans. Love, Carol
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