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i remember the time on a cold winters day when i was called home from school dad told me mama that you passed away and his heart was crying for you we all cried a lot on that day mom me and dad and sister sal some say it seems like only yesterday but to me it seems like a thousand days of hell it hurt dad so much you see and he couldnt hold up his head it even got worse just a while ago when he learned that sally was dead dad took to drinking a lot after that and he couldnt carry on that way mom save him a spot in heaven with you because dad he just died today now save me a spot in heaven with you because soon mom i am coming home tell the good lord to make us a spot so we will never again be alone

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Date: 11/19/2009 6:55:00 PM
Sad poem Larry, but full of love. It might read easier with some punctuation..I like it! BG
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