Savannah In the Sunset

As the Sun went to sleep
in the beautiful blue horizon,
the clouds looked like as though
they were glowing from within

The birds created patterns
in the darkening sky,
as they went back to their nests

Giraffes, gazelles and elephants
decorated the landscape
with their different shades of colors,
as they returned back to their abode

Trees’ barks looked as though
they were burning from fire
that couldn’t consume them;
a natural effect of the Sun’s divine
Sunset glow

This is the place that I discovered
the beautiful art of the Creator;
an art like no other
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kimathi Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Thanks all for your kind applaud. I really appreciate it! ;-)
A   Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:51 PM
Teddy, love the win...PD
De Burca Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 11:41 AM
Congrats on your winning poem, a wonderful read.
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December 13, 2013 at 10:15 AM
A great poem Teddy.Wonderful.Thanks for the support.(: ) Jenish.
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem on nature, Congrats, Teddy
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