Savages

Wild life usually means scary and unusual animals Have dated some girls who were like wicked savages Wanting to growl and wrestle Trouble keeping upright and level Who am I kidding, loved it in spite of the bandages

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Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 8/27/2017 5:46:00 PM

Yeah i'm sure you do love it Jack, lol.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/27/2017 5:51:00 PM

Yah, kinda enjoyed it except for the nasty scrapes and bruises!!! All in all, I admit I kinda enjoyed it!!! LOL Love & hugs, Jack xxx

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 8/27/2017 12:00:00 PM

I hope they were applied properly. Sloppy bandages fall off.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/27/2017 4:08:00 PM

Oh my goodness.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/27/2017 1:00:00 PM

YES! They were and as I told John John, one of my attackers was a nurse!!! Otherwise, I could have bled to daeth!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/27/2017 8:37:00 AM

Had a hard time keeping an even keel?//Those girls all over your sex appeal?//I'll make a note//what floats your boat//Is the sound of those fillies when they squeal. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!! (hmm, I think I'm beginning to sound like you;-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/27/2017 8:46:00 AM

YUP!!! But that's chance you take when you hang around OLD Jacko!!! GOOD A.M. SIR JOHN JOHN!!!