Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Savage Brut-Picture This Contest

In 5 Lines Or Less Picture This Contest
Sponsor: SKAT A

                  
Break the chains you fiend, the beast who intoxicates,
     Drain my luscious blood with your violent excoriation,
             Find utmost drunkenness killing my acute psyche,
                   Hemorrhage my destituted soul into fornication,
                       My savage brut, devour me for your consecration.
 
Written: October 31, 2015
Laura Urbaniak

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Paul Callus November 11, 2015 at 2:47 PM Such a unique, dark take on this visual, Laura! You offer an excellent interpretation. Congratulations on a deserved win. Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 8, 2015 at 9:48 PM Congrats on ur awesome winning write Laura!

Andrea Dietrich November 8, 2015 at 10:29 AM Very interesting take on these brutes! Congrats for your win.

Ralph Sergi November 8, 2015 at 10:18 AM Hi Laura: beautiful choice of words! CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!

Alexis Y. November 7, 2015 at 11:42 PM Laura, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Skat A November 7, 2015 at 6:17 PM Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win. I have a new blog up, "The Only Thing To Fear, Is Fear It'self" stop by and enjoy the winners and my explanation to all who join my contest. Truly enjoyed. Love SKAT Beautiful Scars November 7, 2015 at 6:33 PM Thank you SKAT!! I really enjoyed Picture This contest!! Thanks :) -LU I will stop be soon, be blessed

Constance La France October 31, 2015 at 1:27 PM Laura, how deep and dark and fabulous, love it 7 and best of luck in the contest ~ Beautiful Scars October 31, 2015 at 5:33 PM Thank you Broken Wings. I appreciate your kind words you are always so sweet :) Be blessed -LU